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I'd agree that it would help your overall composition and presentation if you'd have a full view of the creature. For this you could do some more studies.
> At first glance I'd say that the bone structure of your beast could use some revision so this would be the point where you could start. Particularly the front shoulder and the foot look off.
> Then you could continue adjusting the shading. At some points it still looks a bit rough.
> For the final touches I'd suggest to draw more irregular bubbles - especially the big ones look quite artificial.
I think I need to start with more of a plan when it comes to these pieces, I was just kind of messing around with the whole thing and it just grew.
Its too bad about the bubbles, I was feeling really proud of them.
Thanks for your advice! It really helps and I appreciate it
Aww, don't be sad about the bubbles! Maybe you could try this: [link] Those forms are a bit more organic and natural. :3